Nice
In some ways it is improved from chapter one and in other ways it hasn't for example, the graphics here seem a bit better, and the parts with text seem more well designed and professional than in chapter 1, However, the tiny size of the game screen for chapter two is a MAJOR drawback I think, not just because everything is smaller which can bother people, but because visually a larger screen area seems to be more stimulating especially in games. Your graphics were pretty strong overall though, which is good, and good choice of soundtrack as well. Gameplay was interesting, but may have been a little too linear for some players, so maybe on chapter three give players more options to wander around to look for things which makes the game more challenging. I have to admit though for how linear it was you did a good job of adding a bunch of cool details along the way that made the game enjoyable.