El-Syd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[abes story]

hey

you shouldn't upload half finished pieces to the portal, they belong in alphas section, that being said, your animation looks like it could be pretty interesting, so FINISH your project then post it back up. Also, you seem like you could turn out to be an interesting flash artist, so instead of wasting your time on other peoples already used ideas, you should create your own stories and your own characters, it might sound hard now, but trust me, you'll have a lot more fun doing it in the end.

[Shape collab]

hmmm

It seems like you guys could have put a little more effort into it, also, on any collaboration project you should list the names of all the people who made it. (also you have it titled as a collab, but labeled as a solo project, its not a collaboration if you worked on it alone.)

Magyar responds:

yeah I didn't have him on my portal buddies when I submitted it.

[Mario's dumb decision]

hmmmm

I really don't know how to feel about this one, on one hand you used sprites, which is the lazy way out, on the other hand I thought it was actually pretty funny. As far as it being your first movie you definitely have the right idea that a lot of people don't seem to understand at first, you have a short simple yet funny plot. I dont know if it will get passed or blammed, but keep at it, you're pretty good.

[RWD: 020 EARTH]

hah

Short but sweet

[Angry Dog - Be My Bitch]

haha

well done, AGAIN

[Sora Vs Cloud Vs Sonic]

hmmm

It's ok for a first animation, but... try to avoid using sprites, they always turn out pixelly and it's a pretty unoriginal way to go. Even if you use those characters you should animate them yourself, that way you have more control over their actions, other than that keep on learning flash, it will only get easier.

[This is not a drill]

hey

put SOME effort into it at least

[The Tale of Blackie]

hmmm

a good idead, but you need to animate your stills, and give it a lil more work

[There She Is!! step4]

hey!

Yeah after seeing the other ones this one is way different. But that's good, because in life sometimes things are more carefree and sometimes more serious. A person who can capture that essence in animation, is truly an artist capturing life. Well done, and looking forward to the conclusion.