Oh wow
That was awesome, cool stlye od drawing, and a catchy story to boot, I can't wait for chapter 2. There were only two things that bugged me a bit, but they did not detract from the story in any way., the first was the "rose character seemed like she could've been drawn a little better, she had kind of a strong brow and jawjine in the close shots which made her look a bit masculine, the second thing is that at the end, the angles the cars were faceing didn't match the angle they were actually moving at, so those are just two things to keep in mind I guess. Altogether though the whole thing was so well done that it more than made up for this. Hey when is Chapter 2 coming out?