El-Syd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kingdom Hearts Flash ep1]

A very good first

I am impressed because you did not make many of the mistakes that many spriters make, and it is only your first flash. For example, rather than small barely visible words you have large easily readable ones, yourchoice of music was fitting, and You obviously have a good grip on where a stry is, and where you want it to go. For your next flash, try to focus a lot on timing of movement and natural phyical movement such as jumping falling at natural angles and speeds. Let me know when you release your next project.

choujiakamichi responds:

will do

[The Christmas Nutcracker]

well...

humor was alright, and movement was fine, but drawings could've used a little more attention. Also I noticed a high pitched whine on all of your recorded lines, I don't know what recording program you used, but if it was audacity there is a noise removal tool. If it was not audacity, send the sound files to me and I will remove the background sound for you. If you are interested send me a PM.

Afro-wolf responds:

Sweet, I'll get audacity asap!

[f3]

I'm impressed

Very few people can pull of an abstract animation and make it look good. I know you didn't do the background art, but you definitely made a good choice. Good music for this sort of thing, your timing and sense of fluidic movement are impeccable. Keep it up. I think I might check out your other two later on if I have time.

Voiceover responds:

Thanks so much for the critique. It's hard to find people who actually take some time to write an in-depth analysis.
I must warn you, though, that the other two animations are far from matching this one.

[Starcon2 Western Show]

not bad

Your lipsynching was very well timed to the words, and this was very fun to watch. I like your use of crossingout and changing the words it was pretty comical. Great animation on the "head tentacles", there were some other parts, though that could have been more animated. All in all you did a pretty good job though.

[Poring Chaos : Cross atac]

Hmmm

Very nice choice of music, also, you have a very good sense of 3d for a flash animator, so I really have to give you credit for that. Congrats on the sponsor, by the way.

looksbo responds:

Thanx El-Syf, I love you :D

[PantsRtight]

not bad

Not a good stand alone animation, but cool aspect ratio, makes me wonder, is it possible to have an animated GIF as a userpage header?

[Tankmen A Merry Tankmas]

Nice Parody

All in all you pulled this oone off pretty well, but it seemed like it coulda used a little more.

[MGS Sniper Mission]

Nice

Pretty good fbf, and a nice spoof all in all

[Fiddler on the Roof Worm]

Not bad

I liked the worms facial expressions as well as the melodramatic music for the birds approach. It seemed to end rather abruptly though, and it could'vce definitely been longer.