El-Syd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Slimboy 5000]

Nice ad

I always thought the huge list of sideeffects on those commercials always outweighed whatever it was they were claiming to cure, and you definitely used this to your comedic advantage. Nice drawings nice voicework, and great flash.

[Annoying Mariachis]

Nice premise

It's pretty funny, That gag reminds me of that Ben Stiller movie. But yeah, you should make it longer and rerelease it at original flash quality.

[Metal slug total war!#3]

hmmm

Overall lokked good, but there were a few things that kinda bothered me, first, the music didn't really match a war scene, also, the lettering was ver close colorwise to the background, so some people may have to strain their eyes to see it. Also, you may want to add the gun sound effects.

[oliver the twisted pleb]

hahahaha

Oh man, I love this stuff today. Both the tongue kill, and the death-fart were nice touches. Please sir I want some more... cartoons.

jayeshepherd93 responds:

lol thanks for the kind words, and there could be one tomorow if theres time before i go to my dads. stay tuned and thanks for the review

[Cubiquity]

Really nice

I always enjoy a good story about a flawed utopia and you pulled this one off very well. The plain and angular style present throughout your animation emphasized this cultures lack of individuality, and truly set the stage for your story. Also, I would say it even parallels modern society to a degree, (as do I suppose most storys warning us about a future with absolute control) You may have, for example noticed the change in architecture over just this last century, I don't know if you live in a city, but if you can, take a look at a builing buils around 1900, you may notice the Precise artistic details, the Innovative personalized architecture, and the overall character of the building, On the other hand take a look at any of the many dozens of faceless impersonal Condos, which are doubtlessly being built at a rediculous rate somewhere in your general vicinity, you may notice their cold sterility, and lack of artistic influence. I'm rambling, but in short, your flash really rings true, and should hopefully give viewers something to mull over for awhile, as this piece truly is a possible portrayal of the path our society is leading us down. Best of luck in your future flashes, you're a great storyteller.

SilverStitch responds:

Wow...thanks! I didn't expect a response like this, but yeah, this being an English major, things like that were all considered. Thanks for noticing and thanks for liking it. ^,,^

[That wall]

Yes

The New music really did make the difference. I like how free and imaginative this is, now if you do want to add more, find some varios sound effects for the stuff going on, if you feel like miving onto your next project, that's cool to, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with.

[Mario Control]

nice movement quality

It match up surprizingly well, you should be proud of what you've done here, it was really fun to watch, ps White gloves woulda been a cool touch(smash)

[Arrested Development Line]

Nice line test

You have a great sense of timing to your motions

[Civil War: Weapons]

heh

I thought that was pretty funny knda informative too, but you never made the third gun, which was basically a gatling gun, you just repeated the drawing of the first gun. Other than that, it was fun to watch, the voice was pretty funny too.

mewball responds:

i was rushed XD

[Aquipod]

hmmm

Nice ad spoof, but looked like it could've used a lot more effort.