El-Syd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Frame.Eternity]

Not bad

Yeah, it doesn't quite match up to f3 but this is by no means bad, even at this point, I can tell you have a great since of movement and timing. And it gives you a frame of reference as to how much you've advanced over time.

Voiceover responds:

I'm really happy you actually took the time to take a look.

[Luigi's Confession]

hahaha

nice, really well done, allthat great direction and dramatic build up, and it ends so simply. Hilarious, really unexpected, and funny.

hrechkaness responds:

thank you that was what i was going for ;) thx for the review!

[High All Day]

hahaha hells yeah

That shit was funny especially when the cabbie was rapping too, This came together real nice, I bet this took quite a bit of time to make.

blacklung5 responds:

Thank you! I did take a long time but im done :3 thanks for the VIEW! my friend :3

[Kingdom Hearts Flash ep1]

A very good first

I am impressed because you did not make many of the mistakes that many spriters make, and it is only your first flash. For example, rather than small barely visible words you have large easily readable ones, yourchoice of music was fitting, and You obviously have a good grip on where a stry is, and where you want it to go. For your next flash, try to focus a lot on timing of movement and natural phyical movement such as jumping falling at natural angles and speeds. Let me know when you release your next project.

choujiakamichi responds:

will do

[The Christmas Nutcracker]

well...

humor was alright, and movement was fine, but drawings could've used a little more attention. Also I noticed a high pitched whine on all of your recorded lines, I don't know what recording program you used, but if it was audacity there is a noise removal tool. If it was not audacity, send the sound files to me and I will remove the background sound for you. If you are interested send me a PM.

Afro-wolf responds:

Sweet, I'll get audacity asap!

[f3]

I'm impressed

Very few people can pull of an abstract animation and make it look good. I know you didn't do the background art, but you definitely made a good choice. Good music for this sort of thing, your timing and sense of fluidic movement are impeccable. Keep it up. I think I might check out your other two later on if I have time.

Voiceover responds:

Thanks so much for the critique. It's hard to find people who actually take some time to write an in-depth analysis.
I must warn you, though, that the other two animations are far from matching this one.

[Poring Chaos : Cross atac]

Hmmm

Very nice choice of music, also, you have a very good sense of 3d for a flash animator, so I really have to give you credit for that. Congrats on the sponsor, by the way.

looksbo responds:

Thanx El-Syf, I love you :D

[La Palmera Cago a Sonic]

asi asi

este no es malo, pero no es muy original. Tambien es muy corto. Tu animaccion es bueno, y tu musica tambien. Mas puntas con subtitulos Ingles. If you need help translating anything. I may be able to assist, but my spanish isn't that great.

SuperWiiBros08 responds:

Casi no se Mucho Ingle, Pero Intentare ponerle el subtitulo Ingles

[A Merry-Hallow-Versary 08]

hmmm

It was okay I guess, nut there wasn't much actual animation, mostly just stillframes

JumpingGirraffe responds:

That was just at the halloween part..

[oliver the twisted pleb]

hahahaha

Oh man, I love this stuff today. Both the tongue kill, and the death-fart were nice touches. Please sir I want some more... cartoons.

jayeshepherd93 responds:

lol thanks for the kind words, and there could be one tomorow if theres time before i go to my dads. stay tuned and thanks for the review