El-Syd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bounty]

Well done

You are a master of frame by frame, how long did that take you to do. This is just hands down, a kickass flash.

kojitia responds:

Thanks man! it took me about 2 months since i refused to make this flash less then mostly frame by frame!!

[Octopus Moustache]

simple and original

one of the most interesting things that's come through the flash portal in a while.

SASlack responds:

Thanks El-Syd, that's a great compliment. Thanks for the review and the nice score.

[The Silver Arrow]

haha

really shitty rap that doesn't keep beat and uses rhymes that a 7 year old would think up, but decent drawing and ok animation.

Kodfish responds:

I didn't make the song, and I animated this a while ago.

thanks for the comment, though!

[Chun Li Investigate II]

hmmm

not bad, but the sprite your using for her has too broad of shoulders and too big of feet, which makes her look like a man., chun li was one of the girliest characters, so you might want to edit your sprites.

Myridon responds:

Like a say above I'm planning on giving her more poses. her original costume doesn't look very incognito for these 'espionage' things she does ha ha.

[gibbons.swf]

I have to say...

You have a really cool unique style, this flash really sets a creepy mood, well done.

Krebskopf responds:

Thanks buddy, I like where my "style" is headed too.

[Restaurant Of Alice]

yeah

I've always liked this song, and this was the most interesting animated text flash I've seen here on newgrounds. The timing was perfect. How many layers did you end up having to use for the single letter dropdowns and such?

cheshirecat1582 responds:

Oh god.... Ummm Like maybe 7 layers... But allot of the text is its own graphic so It would keep it nice and neat... Im pretty annal about layers... A single movie wont have more then 5-7 layers or else I get too confused... Thanks for your review!!! Lol I love the song also... Im thinking about finishing it... well at least adding on to it... dont know if i can keep my attention span for the full 18 min... Lol Thanks again for the review!!!

[handsy]

hmmm

reeally good so far, but it seems rather inconclusive and unfinished. add music and visual cues to let the audience truly knows where your idea begins and ends. also, I wanted to say that this is really nice frame by framing. It may seem productive to get feedback before the final submission is done, but when you put out the final one, it may get a deceptively lower rating, because if people have already seen the "preview" the final piece may seem less novel.

bonkanailios responds:

yeah, I have been animating for ages now and I came back to newgrounds and saw these old little films I used to do.... usually taking about 3-5 hours each. I liked them alot and decided to stop being goal driven or content driven for a little while and just animate some shit. He has birdfeet and that never fails to make me laugh. Thanks for the time you took aside to veiw the piece.

[DodgeBall: Sports Odyssey]

hmmm

Pretty good, but you spelled Odyssey wrong, you should be careful of typos especially if they're in your title.

Noblewolf09 responds:

Thank you for catching the typo and the review. I appreciate them.